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April 30, 2008

Critique of Leanne's First Draft

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I spent a great deal of time going over Leanne's first draft and have uploaded a copy of it with my comments and edits in addition to my critique of it. I hope that her second draft is completed with enough time to allow me to critique it before the end of the semester!!!! She has a very interesting topic and has clearly done a great deal of work ... she just needs to finish it.

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