Progress

I have been working on my powerpoint presentation, focusing as much on the conclusions I reached from the data rather than the data itself because the data is pretty much just numbers. Additionally, I have been discussing with Leanne over Facebook the progress she is making on her paper because I am to critique it. The gist of our discussions have been my urging her to do it so that I can critique it by next class and her arguing that she has a week. Although I am sure that Leanne will have the paper done in time to submit it to Prof. Petrik I am concerned that I will not have enough time to critique as that is due the same day. In the meantime, I am going to give her a more detailed critique on her first draft. Hopefully this will help!